Thursday, March 22, 2007
Tuesday, March 13, 2007
REVIEWS
FILM REVIEW
FILM: The Unknown Street
LINK: http://films.thelot.com/films/11265
RATING: 3.5 / 5
FILM: The Unknown Street
LINK: http://films.thelot.com/films/11265
RATING: 3.5 / 5
WHAT I LIKED: This documentary certainly has a heart and the imagery
is tragically beautiful in it's exotic locals and textured reality. It
also represents a unique perspective where the filmmaker himself is
very much a part of his message - the theme of surviving on limited
resources but thriving on altruism and the drive to achieve in
life/film making.
WHAT I SUGGEST: As I've commented on other documentaries, the key to
conveying your message is credibility. You are relying too much on the
sentimentality of your audience (how your audience feels about your
subject) rather than your characters/subjects evoking their own
sentiments.
The imagery you present goes a long way in establishing your
credibility but go one step farther - break the silence of these
people, get that camera up close and personal. Nice work.
When the chase is cut short, the guns come out to play! Check out GUNPLAY!
http://films.thelot.com/films/20882
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FILM REVIEW
FILM: Hero Hero
LINK: http://films.thelot.com/films/13970
RATING: 4 / 5
WHAT I LIKED: Playful photography and music. The performances and
locations exuded a wonderfully deep sense of New York / Brooklyn
culture.
WHAT I SUGGEST: The boy got lost in the shuffle - he could have
contributed to the end.
Fun film!
When the chase is cut short, the guns come out to play! Check out GUNPLAY!
http://films.thelot.com/films/20882
Saturday, March 10, 2007
FILM REVIEWS
FILM REVIEW
FILM: Broken Doll Director's Cut
LINK: http://films.thelot.com/films/
8941
RATING: 3 / 5
WHAT I LIKED: Great opening graphics and photography give this film a unique style that pays homage to the psychological horror thrillers of old - very Hitchcock.
WHAT I SUGGEST: Ambient sound went in and out and the poor, hollow quality of the camera clicks and spoken words disrupted the experience.
Very curious film!
When the chase is cut short, the guns come out to play! Check out GUNPLAY!
http://films.thelot.com/films/
20882
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FILM REVIEW
FILM: THE THING UNDER MY BED
LINK: http://films.thelot.com/films/
10270
RATING: 3 / 5
WHAT I LIKED: Great opening shot that establishes a freaky character. There are some genuinely tense moments when the "boogey man" pop in and out of the frame. Kinetic photography.
WHAT I SUGGEST: Some of the shots were too dark to follow the action. The film does well to exploit some moments of surprise but it never mixes up the formula and the film ultimately does nothing satisfying with each time it catches your attention.
Nice make up job - the old man is certainly freaky.
When the chase is cut short, the guns come out to play! Check out GUNPLAY!
http://films.thelot.com/films/
20882
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FILM REVIEW
FILM: POPCORN DREAMS
LINK: http://films.thelot.com/films/
2557
RATING: 4 / 5
WHAT I LIKED: Very smooth, cinematic photography with stylized lighting and set design that supported the narrative. Playful music selection.
WHAT I SUGGEST: The end is a bit anticlimactic despite the moral of the story - because the film is so stylized and fantasy centric there is an expectation of a bigger than life ending. But the film's end is more or less a "real-life" irony which seemingly contradicts its look and feel.
Nice film!
When the chase is cut short, the guns come out to play! Check out GUNPLAY!
http://films.thelot.com/films/
20882
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FILM REVIEW
FILM: Beans on Wheels - 3
LINK: http://films.thelot.com/films/
29135
RATING: 3 / 5
WHAT I LIKED: Quirky film with some funny, almost disturbing, images (and audio). Some shots had a unique look and feel (like when the wheel chair bound woman was rolling through a disaster of a house - good stuff).
WHAT I SUGGEST: The quality of the photography was very inconsistent. Some of the ambient noise became really distracting.
Sad, yes. Funny, yes!
When the chase is cut short, the guns come out to play! Check out GUNPLAY!
http://films.thelot.com/films/
20882
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FILM REVIEW
FILM: MY WALLET
LINK: http://films.thelot.com/films/
15693
RATING: 3.5 / 5
WHAT I LIKED: Like a well adapted live action Looney Tunes cartoon. Some great comical timing and action, interesting shot selection, and some funny impromptu moments.
WHAT I SUGGEST: As great as some of action camera work was, the quality was inconsistent and most of the sound was not clear or the levels were uneven.
Great work! Looks like this film was fun to make.
When the chase is cut short, the guns come out to play! Check out GUNPLAY!
http://films.thelot.com/films/
20882
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FILM REVIEW
FILM: creasy
LINK: http://films.thelot.com/films/
20493
RATING: 4 / 5
WHAT I LIKED: Fantastic photography - well lit and composed. The performances were sincere and hit the right dramatic tone. I can appreciate the angle of the story - not the typical anti-pharmaceutical big-business scenario but of someone caught in between.
WHAT I SUGGEST: The main speech verged on melodrama simply because it ran too long and pushed in too close when the true intimacy between the character and audience should have been during the last shot of Creasy visiting the grave.
Great looking film!
When the chase is cut short, the guns come out to play! Check out GUNPLAY!
http://films.thelot.com/films/
20882
FILM: Broken Doll Director's Cut
LINK: http://films.thelot.com/films/
8941
RATING: 3 / 5
WHAT I LIKED: Great opening graphics and photography give this film a unique style that pays homage to the psychological horror thrillers of old - very Hitchcock.
WHAT I SUGGEST: Ambient sound went in and out and the poor, hollow quality of the camera clicks and spoken words disrupted the experience.
Very curious film!
When the chase is cut short, the guns come out to play! Check out GUNPLAY!
http://films.thelot.com/films/
20882
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FILM REVIEW
FILM: THE THING UNDER MY BED
LINK: http://films.thelot.com/films/
10270
RATING: 3 / 5
WHAT I LIKED: Great opening shot that establishes a freaky character. There are some genuinely tense moments when the "boogey man" pop in and out of the frame. Kinetic photography.
WHAT I SUGGEST: Some of the shots were too dark to follow the action. The film does well to exploit some moments of surprise but it never mixes up the formula and the film ultimately does nothing satisfying with each time it catches your attention.
Nice make up job - the old man is certainly freaky.
When the chase is cut short, the guns come out to play! Check out GUNPLAY!
http://films.thelot.com/films/
20882
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FILM REVIEW
FILM: POPCORN DREAMS
LINK: http://films.thelot.com/films/
2557
RATING: 4 / 5
WHAT I LIKED: Very smooth, cinematic photography with stylized lighting and set design that supported the narrative. Playful music selection.
WHAT I SUGGEST: The end is a bit anticlimactic despite the moral of the story - because the film is so stylized and fantasy centric there is an expectation of a bigger than life ending. But the film's end is more or less a "real-life" irony which seemingly contradicts its look and feel.
Nice film!
When the chase is cut short, the guns come out to play! Check out GUNPLAY!
http://films.thelot.com/films/
20882
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FILM REVIEW
FILM: Beans on Wheels - 3
LINK: http://films.thelot.com/films/
29135
RATING: 3 / 5
WHAT I LIKED: Quirky film with some funny, almost disturbing, images (and audio). Some shots had a unique look and feel (like when the wheel chair bound woman was rolling through a disaster of a house - good stuff).
WHAT I SUGGEST: The quality of the photography was very inconsistent. Some of the ambient noise became really distracting.
Sad, yes. Funny, yes!
When the chase is cut short, the guns come out to play! Check out GUNPLAY!
http://films.thelot.com/films/
20882
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FILM REVIEW
FILM: MY WALLET
LINK: http://films.thelot.com/films/
15693
RATING: 3.5 / 5
WHAT I LIKED: Like a well adapted live action Looney Tunes cartoon. Some great comical timing and action, interesting shot selection, and some funny impromptu moments.
WHAT I SUGGEST: As great as some of action camera work was, the quality was inconsistent and most of the sound was not clear or the levels were uneven.
Great work! Looks like this film was fun to make.
When the chase is cut short, the guns come out to play! Check out GUNPLAY!
http://films.thelot.com/films/
20882
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FILM REVIEW
FILM: creasy
LINK: http://films.thelot.com/films/
20493
RATING: 4 / 5
WHAT I LIKED: Fantastic photography - well lit and composed. The performances were sincere and hit the right dramatic tone. I can appreciate the angle of the story - not the typical anti-pharmaceutical big-business scenario but of someone caught in between.
WHAT I SUGGEST: The main speech verged on melodrama simply because it ran too long and pushed in too close when the true intimacy between the character and audience should have been during the last shot of Creasy visiting the grave.
Great looking film!
When the chase is cut short, the guns come out to play! Check out GUNPLAY!
http://films.thelot.com/films/
20882
Friday, March 09, 2007
BUDDHA AND THE HECKLER - RESPONSE TO A REVIEW OF GUNPLAY
SKYGUY: Who said anything about GUNPLAY being a "gangsta" flick? I said this film was based on the writings of Dashiell Hammett - look it up. It sounded like you had something intelligent to say about some of the shots and editing but then you tripped up on your own ego and I didn't understand the point you were trying to make - were you trying to say that the use of the guns didn't fulfill your expectations of the ending? The ending was suppose to be somewhat comical, if not, unexpected. So let me tell you a story in response to your attitude towards my film and me:
When Buddha was speaking to a group of people one day, a heckler interrupted him with a barrage of disrespectful insults. This continued for days until finally Buddha ask the man a simple question in the form of a short anecdote: If you were to give someone a gift and they were to refuse to accept that gift, then to whom does that gift belong? The heckler responded by saying that the unaccepted gift would belong to the person giving the gift. Then Buddha asked: Then if you were to give me your insults and I were to refuse to accept those insults, then to whom do those insults belong? The heckler could not respond.
Thanks for watching mdduke, and you're right - it should be 1 luv. So BLEEP you and I'll be sure to check your film out ; )
mdduke | Mar 08, 2007
CUZ this was the worst want to be gangsta flick I have seen in some time. It doesn't look like this is the genre for U, I don't know whether to blame U or the actors for this BLEEP. Any body that knows what a gun is knows that when the barrel is exposed like it was that means the clip is empty. What was the purpose for him taking it out to look at it, was it because U were trying to add suspense? Well let me be the first to tell you all that did was further add to the disappointment of that 5:46 minute waste time. The way you placed all the frames together was not the problem, it was just the concept and story line. Leave the genre to the people that know about gun play CUZ that BLEEP was a motha BLEEPin GUN SHAME. Change the title to "gun lame," it would suit your film better!
1 luv & may God B wit U CUz!
PS if U look at my film U will see doing some comical things with my heater. But best believe I can break that chrome BLEEP down blind folded! The BLEEP I was doing wit my BLEEP was 4 kicks, and not to be taken serious. U need to put your film under comedy CUZ dat BLEEP was a riot!
When Buddha was speaking to a group of people one day, a heckler interrupted him with a barrage of disrespectful insults. This continued for days until finally Buddha ask the man a simple question in the form of a short anecdote: If you were to give someone a gift and they were to refuse to accept that gift, then to whom does that gift belong? The heckler responded by saying that the unaccepted gift would belong to the person giving the gift. Then Buddha asked: Then if you were to give me your insults and I were to refuse to accept those insults, then to whom do those insults belong? The heckler could not respond.
Thanks for watching mdduke, and you're right - it should be 1 luv. So BLEEP you and I'll be sure to check your film out ; )
mdduke | Mar 08, 2007
CUZ this was the worst want to be gangsta flick I have seen in some time. It doesn't look like this is the genre for U, I don't know whether to blame U or the actors for this BLEEP. Any body that knows what a gun is knows that when the barrel is exposed like it was that means the clip is empty. What was the purpose for him taking it out to look at it, was it because U were trying to add suspense? Well let me be the first to tell you all that did was further add to the disappointment of that 5:46 minute waste time. The way you placed all the frames together was not the problem, it was just the concept and story line. Leave the genre to the people that know about gun play CUZ that BLEEP was a motha BLEEPin GUN SHAME. Change the title to "gun lame," it would suit your film better!
1 luv & may God B wit U CUz!
PS if U look at my film U will see doing some comical things with my heater. But best believe I can break that chrome BLEEP down blind folded! The BLEEP I was doing wit my BLEEP was 4 kicks, and not to be taken serious. U need to put your film under comedy CUZ dat BLEEP was a riot!
RESPONSES TO GUNPLAY REVIEWS
SKYGUY: Yes, I tried very hard to telegraph everything - some found it
to be too much and others didn't get it at all. I tried to find that
sweet spot of subtlety without being too abstract about my ideas -
then again, I tend to lean towards the commercial sensibility of
wanting to explicate everything. I learn balance with every film I
make. And I back my actors up 100% - there's always room for
improvement but they did a bang-up job for me on set and on screen.
to be too much and others didn't get it at all. I tried to find that
sweet spot of subtlety without being too abstract about my ideas -
then again, I tend to lean towards the commercial sensibility of
wanting to explicate everything. I learn balance with every film I
make. And I back my actors up 100% - there's always room for
improvement but they did a bang-up job for me on set and on screen.
behindtheart | Mar 09, 2007
The acting was? You tryed to hard telagraphing evreything. So
pradictable. I cant spell . The style it was shot in was nice it had a
look. leave somthing to think about. Paint an abstract and let the
breath find the truth.
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SKYGUY: Thanks Hitman_1942! Omitting dialog was a big help in being
able to shoot the coverage I wanted in the time I had. Most don't
realize that the quality of audio, especially dialog, can really make
or break a film. I'll be sure to check out your film. Thanks again for
watching.
Hitman_1942 | Mar 04, 2007
That was actually kinda funny. I liked the animation you did while he
was throwing the gun. I should start making movies where nobody talks
then they won't have to worry about messing up their lines.
Check out The Habit
http://films.thelot.com/films/20947
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SKYGUY: Thanks for recognizing the music! That's all scored by Isaac
Agyeman - really nice guy. We worked hard on getting the right sound
going through several themes and styles. I really do like dealing with
cinematography - it plays an important role in telling my stories. But
directing is the grand challenge. Directing is so abstract in the ways
you can approach it that I am drawn by its mystery. Thanks for
watching!
maxtone | Mar 04, 2007
The audio on intro was a little low.
Though I didn't fully understand project - you get an "A+" for the
MUSIC. It was AWESOME! Love those beats.
You had some very FABULOUS shots though. Lighting was good too. You
have a GREAT EYE for details. Just work on the script more. I know it
was challenging without dialogue.
Good luck.
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SKYGUY: I like me a good, in depth, story as well. But this was more
of an exercise in plotting and fast action. Hopefully my latest film
and my future films will show more of my strength in story. I've also
started a story writing excersize on my blog should you care to check
it out:
http://community.thelot.com/blogs/skyguy
Thanks for the review!
ouneoas | Mar 04, 2007
Nice job on the shot selection and the music( I really liked it).
There were times where the fast motion to regular motion shots were a
little to much. And I agree with maxtone that your story isn't really
there, not to say thats a bad thing per say, just my preference. All
in all nice job and good luck. Thanks for the review.
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Thanks Victor! My latest short, "The Richter Effect," has more dialog
and will be showing at the Newport Beach Film Festival. You can catch
the teaser here:
http://www.skysyndicate.com/samdemo/media.htm
Thanks for the kind review!
victorpeceno | Mar 04, 2007
Good music
i miss dialogue but even without it
it is entertainning
good job
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SKYGUY: I'm glad the end worked for you - it's been a topic of debate
but I'm happy with the ending I decided to go with. Thanks for
dropping by.
jrhndrsn | Mar 04, 2007
The music throughout the film really carried the suspense. The guns
were used in an unexpected way.
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SKYGUY: Why you're welcome! And have another drink on me!
baddsully | Mar 04, 2007
hello. thank you. and good luck.
yeah, i'm drunk on a sunday. and?
Wednesday, March 07, 2007
RESPONSES TO GUNPLAY REVIEWS
SKYGUY: Thanks for the review behindtheart. The performances actors
definitely more caricatures than "real" peoples - like stylized
comicbook characters. Your film is very unique amongst the other film
on The Lot - defintely worth checking out by others.
definitely more caricatures than "real" peoples - like stylized
comicbook characters. Your film is very unique amongst the other film
on The Lot - defintely worth checking out by others.
behindtheart | Mar 03, 2007
When the film started I was taken back by the acting Then I thought
maybe it's over the top on purpose. I liked that it had a styl and a
pace. And it ende up being a fun film. I think you have potential as a
director. Ive seen a hand full of film on here that I loved Im a vey
hard cell. No one looks at my film its hard to find but if you have a
chace to see somthing very very out of the box that will touch your
spirit please take a look. good luck
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SKYGUY: Thanks for checking GUNPLAY out!
schwartzman | Mar 04, 2007
Liked it.
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SKYGUY: I totaly agree that stylized dialog would have been great -
I'm big fan of the film "Brick" which was based on Dashiell Hammett's
style of writing but in a contemporary highschool setting. My film was
defintely an excersize in style and for the sake of getting all the
angles and shots I wanted I opted to omit dialog. Thanks cool review
Steven!
steven_scott | Mar 04, 2007
Cool strobe effect. Has that slightly rotoscopic Waking Life look at
times. It'd be cool to see that developed a bit more, to stylize it to
the point of creating a totally new effect. Really, really like the
tilting, ever-shifting camera angles. The acting was a bit cheesy,
especially the girl. Choice of casting is dubious. I can't really
believe these people as gun-wielding bad guys. The perfect choice of
music to keep the energy going, since there's no dialogue. Speaking
of...I would love to see this with just a string of sexy one-liners,
almost like Beat Era poets, passed from one character to another, like
b*tchslaps. Really smart dialogue, though, or else forget it. Overall,
quite enjoyed it.
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SKYGUY: I can agree that the action is drawn out but that is
essentially the point of GUNPLAY - the most powerful aspect of a gun
is it's threat of force and not the actual flash-bang. Using that
theme, I tried to think of an interesting paradox that played with
what a gun can do besides just shoot someone.
Timothywen | Mar 04, 2007
Nice, the editting a too drawn out for my taste . but different
strokes for different folks
Mine is hard boiled type. alot of shoot em up type
please see http://films.thelot.com/films/30945
Tuesday, March 06, 2007
REVIEWS
FILM REVIEW
FILM: Meat Pie
LINK: http://films.thelot.com/films/
14449
RATING: 3.5 / 5
WHAT I LIKED: Music and matching edits did well to create an energized thrill ride - that 1st shot got me to jump. Fast paced, some great action and effects - the campiness made it fun.
WHAT I SUGGEST: I thought the performances didn't need to be as campy as they were. The last few shots were too dark.
An unexpected fun film with some great effects action.
When the chase is cut short, the guns come out to play! Check out GUNPLAY!
http://films.thelot.com/films/
20882
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FILM REVIEW
FILM: Jackson Horn - A Mystery of Errors
LINK: http://films.thelot.com/films/
29868
RATING: 2.5 / 5
WHAT I LIKED: Good production value in some of the scenes. The final scene had some good moments of drama, a sense that something was unfolding.
WHAT I SUGGEST: The performances seemed very rehearsed and story a bit unclear. The music seemly fit the moods from scene to scene but lacked a common theme/thread to bind the whole film.
Great effort!
When the chase is cut short, the guns come out to play! Check out GUNPLAY!
http://films.thelot.com/films/
20882
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FILM REVIEW
FILM: TERMINAL
LINK: http://films.thelot.com/films/
13447
RATING: 3 / 5
WHAT I LIKED: A familiar premise is used with a nice variety of sequences to generate a genuine interest is what will ultimately happen. The performances were decent.
WHAT I SUGGEST: The overall production between lightning, camera, and editing needed a little polishing. The film does a great job building up to the end but the end itself flat-lined in originality.
A very hot button issue film!
When the chase is cut short, the guns come out to play! Check out GUNPLAY!
http://films.thelot.com/films/
20882
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FILM REVIEW
FILM: SPIRIT RIDE
LINK: http://films.thelot.com/films/
30212
RATING: 4 / 5
WHAT I LIKED: This film is very lyrical in it's presentation. This is yet another enigma of a film that haunts my sensibilities - its a good thing.
WHAT I SUGGEST: I can't say I fully understood the narrative but the images and music work in concert to evoke a range of emotions that are not soon forgotten.
Very unique amongst the films on The Lot.
When the chase is cut short, the guns come out to play! Check out GUNPLAY!
http://films.thelot.com/films/
20882
FILM: Meat Pie
LINK: http://films.thelot.com/films/
14449
RATING: 3.5 / 5
WHAT I LIKED: Music and matching edits did well to create an energized thrill ride - that 1st shot got me to jump. Fast paced, some great action and effects - the campiness made it fun.
WHAT I SUGGEST: I thought the performances didn't need to be as campy as they were. The last few shots were too dark.
An unexpected fun film with some great effects action.
When the chase is cut short, the guns come out to play! Check out GUNPLAY!
http://films.thelot.com/films/
20882
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FILM REVIEW
FILM: Jackson Horn - A Mystery of Errors
LINK: http://films.thelot.com/films/
29868
RATING: 2.5 / 5
WHAT I LIKED: Good production value in some of the scenes. The final scene had some good moments of drama, a sense that something was unfolding.
WHAT I SUGGEST: The performances seemed very rehearsed and story a bit unclear. The music seemly fit the moods from scene to scene but lacked a common theme/thread to bind the whole film.
Great effort!
When the chase is cut short, the guns come out to play! Check out GUNPLAY!
http://films.thelot.com/films/
20882
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FILM REVIEW
FILM: TERMINAL
LINK: http://films.thelot.com/films/
13447
RATING: 3 / 5
WHAT I LIKED: A familiar premise is used with a nice variety of sequences to generate a genuine interest is what will ultimately happen. The performances were decent.
WHAT I SUGGEST: The overall production between lightning, camera, and editing needed a little polishing. The film does a great job building up to the end but the end itself flat-lined in originality.
A very hot button issue film!
When the chase is cut short, the guns come out to play! Check out GUNPLAY!
http://films.thelot.com/films/
20882
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FILM REVIEW
FILM: SPIRIT RIDE
LINK: http://films.thelot.com/films/
30212
RATING: 4 / 5
WHAT I LIKED: This film is very lyrical in it's presentation. This is yet another enigma of a film that haunts my sensibilities - its a good thing.
WHAT I SUGGEST: I can't say I fully understood the narrative but the images and music work in concert to evoke a range of emotions that are not soon forgotten.
Very unique amongst the films on The Lot.
When the chase is cut short, the guns come out to play! Check out GUNPLAY!
http://films.thelot.com/films/
20882
Sunday, March 04, 2007
THE PARADOX OF A BAD REVIEW
Reviewing is tough and ultimately I am not a film critic but more the film maker. So when I rate a film below the film maker's expectations or desires, I do feel a sense of guilt that I'm hindering their hope and not encouraging their growth. That's why I extend my comments beyond simple compliments because we are all in the attempt to defy odds - a feat that can't be done solo. The "star" rating system is nothing but a shortcut but everyone, including myself, put too much value in just what is measured in that shallow gap of 1-5 stars. So I've decided that if I'm going to rate a film below 3 stars, I will not apply it to the star rating, but I will leave my usual review in hopes that my comments will foster learning and not discouragement.
Don't get me wrong, there are a lot of bad films out there and putting them in their place clears the way for films that deserve attention. But timing and purpose are important in knowing when to drop that hammer.
Thanks for listening! And thanks for all the entertainment.
Sam
Don't get me wrong, there are a lot of bad films out there and putting them in their place clears the way for films that deserve attention. But timing and purpose are important in knowing when to drop that hammer.
Thanks for listening! And thanks for all the entertainment.
Sam
FILM REVIEWS
FILM REVIEW
FILM: METH
LINK: http://films.thelot.com/films/17855
RATING: 4 / 5
FILM: METH
LINK: http://films.thelot.com/films/17855
RATING: 4 / 5
WHAT I LIKED: The best trailer I've seen yet! Exciting visuals, truly
professional looking cinematography, decent dramatic performances - I
wouldn't doubt for a second if I was told this was a high budget
Hollywood production.
WHAT I SUGGEST: Great introduction to a dramatic premise, but I can't
help but want a hint of an extra twist of some kind - a lingering
question in the plot beyond the action story.
Awesome film - high octane stuff! Shot on the DVX? You make look like
35mm, not just in color and tonality, but in the way the film moves
and breaths. Sweet!
When the chase is cut short, the guns come out to play! Check out GUNPLAY!
http://films.thelot.com/films/20882
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FILM REVIEW
FILM: la diagonal
LINK: http://films.thelot.com/films/19476
RATING: 2 / 5
WHAT I LIKED: There is a sense of haunting in the way the camera
seemingly floats about this group of students - I think it's an
inherent feeling one gets with that greenish infrared look.
WHAT I SUGGEST: I wasn't sure why the subtitles were only during parts
of the film. The suspenseful shots in the middle and end didn't quite
catch the sense of surprise it was going for - perhaps because the
camera and edits were too reserved.
Interesting premise, is it based on a true story of some kind?
When the chase is cut short, the guns come out to play! Check out GUNPLAY!
http://films.thelot.com/films/20882
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FILM REVIEW
FILM: The Deliverers
LINK: http://films.thelot.com/films/8878
RATING: 2.5 / 5
WHAT I LIKED: Despite the crazy antics some of the photography and
locations looked great - well composed. The car shots were really well
done as well.
WHAT I SUGGEST: The premise is clear but there doesn't seem to be an
underline narrative or its not apparent in the trailer.
The full film could make for some funny scenarios!
When the chase is cut short, the guns come out to play! Check out GUNPLAY!
http://films.thelot.com/films/20882
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FILM REVIEW
FILM: My Imagination - Music Video
LINK: http://films.thelot.com/films/10513
RATING: 2.5 / 5
WHAT I LIKED: Well intentioned with a very altruistic message. I can
sense a very personal journey wants to be told.
WHAT I SUGGEST: As sincere as the performances seemed, they were
over-played and too literal.
You have great energy and that goes a long way!
When the chase is cut short, the guns come out to play! Check out GUNPLAY!
http://films.thelot.com/films/20882
FILM CUE
Got through a good chunk of film reviews - saw some good ones. Here is my film cue as of tonight:
http://films.thelot.com/films/17855
http://films.thelot.com/films/19476
http://films.thelot.com/films/8878
http://films.thelot.com/films/10513
http://films.thelot.com/films/14449
http://films.thelot.com/films/29868
http://films.thelot.com/films/13447
http://films.thelot.com/films/30212
http://films.thelot.com/films/8941
Thanks for all the entertainment! Look forward to watching more.
http://films.thelot.com/films/17855
http://films.thelot.com/films/19476
http://films.thelot.com/films/8878
http://films.thelot.com/films/10513
http://films.thelot.com/films/14449
http://films.thelot.com/films/29868
http://films.thelot.com/films/13447
http://films.thelot.com/films/30212
http://films.thelot.com/films/8941
Thanks for all the entertainment! Look forward to watching more.
FILM REVIEWS
FILM REVIEW
FILM: Trailer - The Abandon House
LINK: http://films.thelot.com/films/2217
RATING: 4 / 5
WHAT I LIKED: Haunting yet enchanting - I have a soft spot for Latin films because they don't just evoke an emotional response (fear, love, anger) they do so with an acute awareness of the heart - I can tell from the subtle lighting and texture that this films aim for that effect.
WHAT I SUGGEST: Even though this is just the trailer, I would want to know a little more about what's going on.
I had to watch Victor's other films to truly appreciate this one - I'd love to see the full film!
When the chase is cut short, the guns come out to play! Check out GUNPLAY!
http://films.thelot.com/films/20882
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FILM REVIEW
FILM: BUBBLES
LINK: http://films.thelot.com/films/1044
RATING: 4 / 5
WHAT I LIKED: Very cute with interesting cinematography and engaging performances. The twist at the end was a pleasant surprise - great writing.
WHAT I SUGGEST: The mother's acting was a bit over-the-top but with the bubble effects and the general stylization of the look and feel, over-all I think it worked.
Great film - a good performance from the kid actress!
When the chase is cut short, the guns come out to play! Check out GUNPLAY!
http://films.thelot.com/films/20882
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FILM REVIEW
FILM: mimesis
LINK: http://films.thelot.com/films/18055
RATING: 3.5 / 5
WHAT I LIKED: I liked the "life imitates art" theme and how it was executed here - nice variety of recreated scenes that were pretty funny at times.
WHAT I SUGGEST: Take out most of the movie footage from the beginning - perhaps just use the audio from the films. So much more fun could be had if the audience is left to guess what movie scenes are being recreated instead of doing a literal comparison.
Great work!
When the chase is cut short, the guns come out to play! Check out GUNPLAY!
http://films.thelot.com/films/20882
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FILM REVIEW
FILM: I Have Dreams Dammit!
LINK: http://films.thelot.com/films/26788
RATING: 3 / 5
WHAT I LIKED: The trailer really shows your positive personality and altruistic intent to make a revealing discovery - very genuine in its presentation and intriguing by its topic.
WHAT I SUGGEST: Trailers are tricky and dreams are so amorphous and broad in scope, so the trailer should give hints as to what you might have discovered (expected and unexpected) - it's not enough to just gather information, your interpretation is of key interest.
I'm anxious to know what you discover!
When the chase is cut short, the guns come out to play! Check out GUNPLAY!
http://films.thelot.com/films/20882
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FILM REVIEW
FILM: El Banditos
LINK: http://films.thelot.com/films/16551
RATING: 3.5 / 5
WHAT I LIKED: Nice use of depth of field - the Lego desert world you created was vivid and felt like it had breadth. I liked how the ending was stylized.
WHAT I SUGGEST: The film left me wanting more than just a robbery and a showdown and more of a justification as to why it was shot with Legos.
Excellent animation set design!
When the chase is cut short, the guns come out to play! Check out GUNPLAY!
http://films.thelot.com/films/20882
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FILM REVIEW
FILM: Addiction
LINK: http://films.thelot.com/films/3607
RATING: 3 / 5
WHAT I LIKED: Some humorous moments presented with all seriousness.
WHAT I SUGGEST: I hate myself for being such a tightwad but the trailer could offer a little more dimension to the main character's addiction beyond simple torment.
You look like you had fun putting this together - good effort!
When the chase is cut short, the guns come out to play! Check out GUNPLAY!
http://films.thelot.com/films/20882
FILM: Trailer - The Abandon House
LINK: http://films.thelot.com/films/2217
RATING: 4 / 5
WHAT I LIKED: Haunting yet enchanting - I have a soft spot for Latin films because they don't just evoke an emotional response (fear, love, anger) they do so with an acute awareness of the heart - I can tell from the subtle lighting and texture that this films aim for that effect.
WHAT I SUGGEST: Even though this is just the trailer, I would want to know a little more about what's going on.
I had to watch Victor's other films to truly appreciate this one - I'd love to see the full film!
When the chase is cut short, the guns come out to play! Check out GUNPLAY!
http://films.thelot.com/films/20882
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FILM REVIEW
FILM: BUBBLES
LINK: http://films.thelot.com/films/1044
RATING: 4 / 5
WHAT I LIKED: Very cute with interesting cinematography and engaging performances. The twist at the end was a pleasant surprise - great writing.
WHAT I SUGGEST: The mother's acting was a bit over-the-top but with the bubble effects and the general stylization of the look and feel, over-all I think it worked.
Great film - a good performance from the kid actress!
When the chase is cut short, the guns come out to play! Check out GUNPLAY!
http://films.thelot.com/films/20882
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FILM REVIEW
FILM: mimesis
LINK: http://films.thelot.com/films/18055
RATING: 3.5 / 5
WHAT I LIKED: I liked the "life imitates art" theme and how it was executed here - nice variety of recreated scenes that were pretty funny at times.
WHAT I SUGGEST: Take out most of the movie footage from the beginning - perhaps just use the audio from the films. So much more fun could be had if the audience is left to guess what movie scenes are being recreated instead of doing a literal comparison.
Great work!
When the chase is cut short, the guns come out to play! Check out GUNPLAY!
http://films.thelot.com/films/20882
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FILM REVIEW
FILM: I Have Dreams Dammit!
LINK: http://films.thelot.com/films/26788
RATING: 3 / 5
WHAT I LIKED: The trailer really shows your positive personality and altruistic intent to make a revealing discovery - very genuine in its presentation and intriguing by its topic.
WHAT I SUGGEST: Trailers are tricky and dreams are so amorphous and broad in scope, so the trailer should give hints as to what you might have discovered (expected and unexpected) - it's not enough to just gather information, your interpretation is of key interest.
I'm anxious to know what you discover!
When the chase is cut short, the guns come out to play! Check out GUNPLAY!
http://films.thelot.com/films/20882
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FILM REVIEW
FILM: El Banditos
LINK: http://films.thelot.com/films/16551
RATING: 3.5 / 5
WHAT I LIKED: Nice use of depth of field - the Lego desert world you created was vivid and felt like it had breadth. I liked how the ending was stylized.
WHAT I SUGGEST: The film left me wanting more than just a robbery and a showdown and more of a justification as to why it was shot with Legos.
Excellent animation set design!
When the chase is cut short, the guns come out to play! Check out GUNPLAY!
http://films.thelot.com/films/20882
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FILM REVIEW
FILM: Addiction
LINK: http://films.thelot.com/films/3607
RATING: 3 / 5
WHAT I LIKED: Some humorous moments presented with all seriousness.
WHAT I SUGGEST: I hate myself for being such a tightwad but the trailer could offer a little more dimension to the main character's addiction beyond simple torment.
You look like you had fun putting this together - good effort!
When the chase is cut short, the guns come out to play! Check out GUNPLAY!
http://films.thelot.com/films/20882
Saturday, March 03, 2007
RESPONSES TO GUNPLAY REVIEWS
SKYGUY: Thanks Silvio. I really enjoyed your film, very funny. Best of luck to you too!
mrsilvio | Mar 03, 2007
Good job on this, pal... Keep up the good work and all the best!
Silvio Pollio aka GUIDO SUPERSTAR
AND
Writer/Producer/Director of "SHUT UP AND SHOOT!"
Starring: Joe Cortese, Tom Sizemore, Gary Busey, John Savage, James Russo, Roddy Piper, Willie Gault, Daniel Baldwin, Debra Wilson and more!
www.justshootit.com
www.myspace.com/silviopollio
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SKYGUY: Thanks moviedirector - out all the films I shot, I like the shots in this one the most. You had me at Lego, I'll check your film out.
moviedirector | Mar 03, 2007
The opening credits were really cool. There were some really cool shots too. Keepup the good work. Please check out my lego animation http://films.thelot.com/films/16551
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SKYGUY: Thanks DGroover2k6! The music was done by the very talented Isaac Agyeman who I met at Cal State Long Beach. Yeah, it's primarily an action piece with very little backstory - I used the Hitchcock convention of the McGuffin (the mystery prize that all the characters want).
DGroover2k6 | Mar 03, 2007
Good action, well staged and cool music! Not much in the story department though.
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SKYGUY: Anthony, Anthony, Anthony... What have I ever done to you for you to treat me with such disrespect... John Woo's Hong Kong flicks were a big influence on me stylistically - he really spun Noir in exciting new direction. Thanks for the kind words and thanks for watching - good luck to you.
anthonychirco | Mar 03, 2007
why would you have john woo in your tags? lol, anyway overall, decent job... good computer graphics, that of course has nothing to do with this competition, but still, good job..
and the intro, with you saying what you told your friend once..what's that all about? just speak straight to the audience!
the beginning kinda confused me, if you're not going to put dialogue just try to make it a little more obvious. keep it up and just spend more time on your next project
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SKYGUY: Aren't you just super duper cute! Thanks for watching and thanks for the film recommendations!
SuperDuperKitty | Mar 03, 2007
OMG people check it out
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SKYGUY: Thanks BattleSpartan. I dig the style of your film - your method (or lack there of) fascinates me.
BattleSpartan | Mar 03, 2007
interesting I like it
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SKYGUY: Thanks for noticing ozan. I shot GUNPLAY on a Canon XL1, chopped it in Avid, processed the color corrections and effects in After Effects with 3D elements rendered from Lightwave 3D and smoke elements from Particle Illusion. Thanks for the compliments and I'll be sure to check your film out.
ozan | Mar 03, 2007
dude, i totally diggid this! Loooked great! love the camera work wat did u film it on?
Check out my low budget, MILLION DOLLAR looking, ONe man show, SPECTACULAR mini short film!
METH - http://films.thelot.com/films/17855
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SKYGUY: Thanks! I'll be sure to drop by your film.
yaffe4663 | Mar 03, 2007
Nice!
http://films.thelot.com/films/3607
Avihai
mrsilvio | Mar 03, 2007
Good job on this, pal... Keep up the good work and all the best!
Silvio Pollio aka GUIDO SUPERSTAR
AND
Writer/Producer/Director of "SHUT UP AND SHOOT!"
Starring: Joe Cortese, Tom Sizemore, Gary Busey, John Savage, James Russo, Roddy Piper, Willie Gault, Daniel Baldwin, Debra Wilson and more!
www.justshootit.com
www.myspace.com/silviopollio
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SKYGUY: Thanks moviedirector - out all the films I shot, I like the shots in this one the most. You had me at Lego, I'll check your film out.
moviedirector | Mar 03, 2007
The opening credits were really cool. There were some really cool shots too. Keepup the good work. Please check out my lego animation http://films.thelot.com/films/16551
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SKYGUY: Thanks DGroover2k6! The music was done by the very talented Isaac Agyeman who I met at Cal State Long Beach. Yeah, it's primarily an action piece with very little backstory - I used the Hitchcock convention of the McGuffin (the mystery prize that all the characters want).
DGroover2k6 | Mar 03, 2007
Good action, well staged and cool music! Not much in the story department though.
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SKYGUY: Anthony, Anthony, Anthony... What have I ever done to you for you to treat me with such disrespect... John Woo's Hong Kong flicks were a big influence on me stylistically - he really spun Noir in exciting new direction. Thanks for the kind words and thanks for watching - good luck to you.
anthonychirco | Mar 03, 2007
why would you have john woo in your tags? lol, anyway overall, decent job... good computer graphics, that of course has nothing to do with this competition, but still, good job..
and the intro, with you saying what you told your friend once..what's that all about? just speak straight to the audience!
the beginning kinda confused me, if you're not going to put dialogue just try to make it a little more obvious. keep it up and just spend more time on your next project
__________
SKYGUY: Aren't you just super duper cute! Thanks for watching and thanks for the film recommendations!
SuperDuperKitty | Mar 03, 2007
OMG people check it out
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SKYGUY: Thanks BattleSpartan. I dig the style of your film - your method (or lack there of) fascinates me.
BattleSpartan | Mar 03, 2007
interesting I like it
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SKYGUY: Thanks for noticing ozan. I shot GUNPLAY on a Canon XL1, chopped it in Avid, processed the color corrections and effects in After Effects with 3D elements rendered from Lightwave 3D and smoke elements from Particle Illusion. Thanks for the compliments and I'll be sure to check your film out.
ozan | Mar 03, 2007
dude, i totally diggid this! Loooked great! love the camera work wat did u film it on?
Check out my low budget, MILLION DOLLAR looking, ONe man show, SPECTACULAR mini short film!
METH - http://films.thelot.com/films/17855
__________
SKYGUY: Thanks! I'll be sure to drop by your film.
yaffe4663 | Mar 03, 2007
Nice!
http://films.thelot.com/films/3607
Avihai
FILM REVIEWS
FILM REVIEW
FILM: E.A.P.
LINK: http://films.thelot.com/films/2101
RATING: 3.5 / 5
WHAT I LIKED: Very moody cinematography - it did a nice job balancing light and dark even when internet streaming can be brutal on dark films. Very nice set and the absinthe shots were fantastic.
WHAT I SUGGEST: I'm not a big fan of films that rely heavily on voice-overs and in all honesty the voice-over could have been removed from this film and it would have been just as effective.
I liked the creepiness of the oldman's face - great production value.
When the chase is cut short, the guns come out to play! Check out GUNPLAY!
http://films.thelot.com/films/20882
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FILM REVIEW
FILM: The Sequence
LINK: http://films.thelot.com/films/30672
RATING: 3 / 5
WHAT I LIKED: Intriguing introduction to a very ambitious question/topic. I liked the graphical and nature elements and would hope they will be more intimately integrated into the feature.
WHAT I SUGGEST: The film seems to touch on such a broad/vast topic (a question that we all ponder) but I'd like to know why I should be interested in watching it through your protagonist.
I hope your film has a really, really good ending!
When the chase is cut short, the guns come out to play! Check out GUNPLAY!
http://films.thelot.com/films/20882
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FILM REVIEW
FILM: CONTROL
LINK: http://films.thelot.com/films/11559
RATING: 3 / 5
WHAT I LIKED: The main actor has some good moments where his torment came through and while the end wasn't necessarily a big surprise there was sense strength in the main character (I was rooting for him).
WHAT I SUGGEST: The lighting and camera work could use some refinement. It would have been nice to have hints of a back story or subtle hints of personality beyond their involvement of their current situation.
That broken tooth is drama!
When the chase is cut short, the guns come out to play! Check out GUNPLAY!
http://films.thelot.com/films/20882
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FILM REVIEW
FILM: Guido Superstar
LINK: http://films.thelot.com/films/25436
RATING: 3.5 / 5
WHAT I LIKED: I actually found this film to be funny - the performance of the caricature was great. Some snappy editing gave it a entertaining style.
WHAT I SUGGEST: The shooting and sound varied in quality which is unfortunate because I was grooving with the premise. Better disco music selection could really electrify this film.
Very fun film - I'd like to see the rest of it.
When the chase is cut short, the guns come out to play! Check out GUNPLAY!
http://films.thelot.com/films/20882
FILM: E.A.P.
LINK: http://films.thelot.com/films/2101
RATING: 3.5 / 5
WHAT I LIKED: Very moody cinematography - it did a nice job balancing light and dark even when internet streaming can be brutal on dark films. Very nice set and the absinthe shots were fantastic.
WHAT I SUGGEST: I'm not a big fan of films that rely heavily on voice-overs and in all honesty the voice-over could have been removed from this film and it would have been just as effective.
I liked the creepiness of the oldman's face - great production value.
When the chase is cut short, the guns come out to play! Check out GUNPLAY!
http://films.thelot.com/films/20882
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FILM REVIEW
FILM: The Sequence
LINK: http://films.thelot.com/films/30672
RATING: 3 / 5
WHAT I LIKED: Intriguing introduction to a very ambitious question/topic. I liked the graphical and nature elements and would hope they will be more intimately integrated into the feature.
WHAT I SUGGEST: The film seems to touch on such a broad/vast topic (a question that we all ponder) but I'd like to know why I should be interested in watching it through your protagonist.
I hope your film has a really, really good ending!
When the chase is cut short, the guns come out to play! Check out GUNPLAY!
http://films.thelot.com/films/20882
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FILM REVIEW
FILM: CONTROL
LINK: http://films.thelot.com/films/11559
RATING: 3 / 5
WHAT I LIKED: The main actor has some good moments where his torment came through and while the end wasn't necessarily a big surprise there was sense strength in the main character (I was rooting for him).
WHAT I SUGGEST: The lighting and camera work could use some refinement. It would have been nice to have hints of a back story or subtle hints of personality beyond their involvement of their current situation.
That broken tooth is drama!
When the chase is cut short, the guns come out to play! Check out GUNPLAY!
http://films.thelot.com/films/20882
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FILM REVIEW
FILM: Guido Superstar
LINK: http://films.thelot.com/films/25436
RATING: 3.5 / 5
WHAT I LIKED: I actually found this film to be funny - the performance of the caricature was great. Some snappy editing gave it a entertaining style.
WHAT I SUGGEST: The shooting and sound varied in quality which is unfortunate because I was grooving with the premise. Better disco music selection could really electrify this film.
Very fun film - I'd like to see the rest of it.
When the chase is cut short, the guns come out to play! Check out GUNPLAY!
http://films.thelot.com/films/20882
Review Cue
Thank you to all of those that have been supportive of my reviews. I wish I could give a high rating to all the films I watch but it is my firm belief that maintaining the integrity of one's opinion is the only way to encourage a meaningful dialog between people (more importantly to maintain a meaningful dialog between us as filmmakers). But I'm as human as anyone and biases are a part of that - just be assured that I will be as honest and constructive as I can.
Because of the number of review requests I have received, I've created a cue of films that I will be watching. It's not in my interest to "barter" reviews with my film but I do invite everyone to watch, rate, review, and enjoy my film ( http://films.thelot.com/films/20882).
I'll do my best to watch all the films but if I spend too much time on these, the wife will go ballistic! So I ask for your patience.
Here's the cue as of 03/03/2007:
http://films.thelot.com/films/30672
http://films.thelot.com/films/11559
http://films.thelot.com/films/2101
http://films.thelot.com/films/25436
http://films.thelot.com/films/2217
http://films.thelot.com/films/1044
http://films.thelot.com/films/18055
http://films.thelot.com/films/26788
http://films.thelot.com/films/16551
http://films.thelot.com/films/3607
http://films.thelot.com/films/17855
http://films.thelot.com/films/19476
http://films.thelot.com/films/8878
http://films.thelot.com/films/10513
Because of the number of review requests I have received, I've created a cue of films that I will be watching. It's not in my interest to "barter" reviews with my film but I do invite everyone to watch, rate, review, and enjoy my film ( http://films.thelot.com/films/20882).
I'll do my best to watch all the films but if I spend too much time on these, the wife will go ballistic! So I ask for your patience.
Here's the cue as of 03/03/2007:
http://films.thelot.com/films/30672
http://films.thelot.com/films/11559
http://films.thelot.com/films/2101
http://films.thelot.com/films/25436
http://films.thelot.com/films/2217
http://films.thelot.com/films/1044
http://films.thelot.com/films/18055
http://films.thelot.com/films/26788
http://films.thelot.com/films/16551
http://films.thelot.com/films/3607
http://films.thelot.com/films/17855
http://films.thelot.com/films/19476
http://films.thelot.com/films/8878
http://films.thelot.com/films/10513
TOP 5 FILMS ON THE LOT UPDATED! AS OF 03/03/07
The top 5 films I've seen thus far on The Lot in accordance to the reviews and ratings I gave them. The ranking will be updated as I watch more films and, of coarse, I left my own film out of the ranking to be fare.
1. The Intuitive Mind, 5/5 (19593)
2. STARS, 5/5 (31207)
3. For All the Marbles, 4/5 (48)
4. Lemons, 4/5 (22240)
5. Apparition, 4/5 (13701)
Honorable mentions:
- P.O.V (Point Of View), 3.5/5 (24798)
- Gone Buggy, 3.5/5 (287)
When the chase is cut short, the guns come out to play! Check out GUNPLAY!
1. The Intuitive Mind, 5/5 (19593)
2. STARS, 5/5 (31207)
3. For All the Marbles, 4/5 (48)
4. Lemons, 4/5 (22240)
5. Apparition, 4/5 (13701)
Honorable mentions:
- P.O.V (Point Of View), 3.5/5 (24798)
- Gone Buggy, 3.5/5 (287)
When the chase is cut short, the guns come out to play! Check out GUNPLAY!
REVIEWS
FILM REVIEW
FILM: Square One
LINK: http://films.thelot.com/films/16823
RATING: 2.5 / 5
WHAT I LIKED: This film offers a sincere look into a little girl's life with footage that looked and felt like genuine home video.
WHAT I SUGGEST: The effects were not integrated well enough to be an effective story telling tool and the narrative itself was a bit unclear.
I always admire filmmakers that are able to work with children.
When the chase is cut short, the guns come out to play! Check out GUNPLAY!
http://films.thelot.com/films/20882
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FILM REVIEW
FILM: P.O.V (Point Of View)
LINK: http://films.thelot.com/films/24798
RATING: 3.5 / 5
WHAT I LIKED: Very ambitious undertaking with an impressive number of digital effects. The the ghostly figure towards the end was great!
WHAT I SUGGEST: On that note, digital effects draw attention to themselves and do not hold up to scrutiny (which can distract attention from the story).
Awesome job!
When the chase is cut short, the guns come out to play! Check out GUNPLAY!
http://films.thelot.com/films/20882
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FILM REVIEW
FILM: Night Farm
LINK: http://films.thelot.com/films/25859
RATING: 3 / 5
WHAT I LIKED: Experimental in it's execution this film does well to exude an unsettled feeling from its amorphous narrative style.
WHAT I SUGGEST: The film almost lost me in the beginning but I slowly got draw into it.
A very curious style you have - I can't even tell if I like it or not but there's something there.
When the chase is cut short, the guns come out to play! Check out GUNPLAY!
http://films.thelot.com/films/20882
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FILM REVIEW
FILM: Gone Buggy
LINK: http://films.thelot.com/films/287
RATING: 3.5/ 5
WHAT I LIKED: Nice, charming story that is well produced and flows nicely from beginning to end.
WHAT I SUGGEST: The photography and animation are well done on their own but when they're integrated, the reality of the film is not as seemless as it should be.
This film has a very youthful spirit to it.
When the chase is cut short, the guns come out to play! Check out GUNPLAY!
http://films.thelot.com/films/20882
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FILM REVIEW
FILM: Lemons
LINK: http://films.thelot.com/films/22240
RATING: 4.5 / 5
WHAT I LIKED: Funny and endearing film. well shot and performed with the music giving it a truly cinematic feel.
WHAT I SUGGEST: The look and feel of this film is strikingly similar to a Cal State Long Beach student film I know called "El Paletero".
Both films are well executed version of an entertaining story.
When the chase is cut short, the guns come out to play! Check out GUNPLAY!
http://films.thelot.com/films/20882
FILM: Square One
LINK: http://films.thelot.com/films/16823
RATING: 2.5 / 5
WHAT I LIKED: This film offers a sincere look into a little girl's life with footage that looked and felt like genuine home video.
WHAT I SUGGEST: The effects were not integrated well enough to be an effective story telling tool and the narrative itself was a bit unclear.
I always admire filmmakers that are able to work with children.
When the chase is cut short, the guns come out to play! Check out GUNPLAY!
http://films.thelot.com/films/20882
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FILM REVIEW
FILM: P.O.V (Point Of View)
LINK: http://films.thelot.com/films/24798
RATING: 3.5 / 5
WHAT I LIKED: Very ambitious undertaking with an impressive number of digital effects. The the ghostly figure towards the end was great!
WHAT I SUGGEST: On that note, digital effects draw attention to themselves and do not hold up to scrutiny (which can distract attention from the story).
Awesome job!
When the chase is cut short, the guns come out to play! Check out GUNPLAY!
http://films.thelot.com/films/20882
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FILM REVIEW
FILM: Night Farm
LINK: http://films.thelot.com/films/25859
RATING: 3 / 5
WHAT I LIKED: Experimental in it's execution this film does well to exude an unsettled feeling from its amorphous narrative style.
WHAT I SUGGEST: The film almost lost me in the beginning but I slowly got draw into it.
A very curious style you have - I can't even tell if I like it or not but there's something there.
When the chase is cut short, the guns come out to play! Check out GUNPLAY!
http://films.thelot.com/films/20882
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FILM REVIEW
FILM: Gone Buggy
LINK: http://films.thelot.com/films/287
RATING: 3.5/ 5
WHAT I LIKED: Nice, charming story that is well produced and flows nicely from beginning to end.
WHAT I SUGGEST: The photography and animation are well done on their own but when they're integrated, the reality of the film is not as seemless as it should be.
This film has a very youthful spirit to it.
When the chase is cut short, the guns come out to play! Check out GUNPLAY!
http://films.thelot.com/films/20882
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FILM REVIEW
FILM: Lemons
LINK: http://films.thelot.com/films/22240
RATING: 4.5 / 5
WHAT I LIKED: Funny and endearing film. well shot and performed with the music giving it a truly cinematic feel.
WHAT I SUGGEST: The look and feel of this film is strikingly similar to a Cal State Long Beach student film I know called "El Paletero".
Both films are well executed version of an entertaining story.
When the chase is cut short, the guns come out to play! Check out GUNPLAY!
http://films.thelot.com/films/20882
TOP 5 FILMS ON THE LOT AS OF 03/03/07
The top 5 films I've seen thus far on The Lot in accordance to the reviews and ratings I gave them. The ranking will be updated as I watch more films and, of coarse, I left my own film out of the ranking to be fare.
1. The Intuitive Mind, 5/5 (19593)
2. STARS 5/5 (31207)
3. For All the Marbles, 4/5 (48)
4. Gummy Bears, 4 / 5 (493)
5. Apparition, 4/5 (13701)
When the chase is cut short, the guns come out to play! Check out GUNPLAY!
http://films.thelot.com/films/20882
1. The Intuitive Mind, 5/5 (19593)
2. STARS 5/5 (31207)
3. For All the Marbles, 4/5 (48)
4. Gummy Bears, 4 / 5 (493)
5. Apparition, 4/5 (13701)
When the chase is cut short, the guns come out to play! Check out GUNPLAY!
http://films.thelot.com/films/20882
FILM REVIEW
FILM REVIEW
FILM: The Intuitive Mind
LINK: http://films.thelot.com/films/19593
RATING: 5 / 5
WHAT I LIKED: Excellent cinematography - composition, colors, set design. There are so many nuances to appreciate in the choreography and performances, all bottled in a quirky hyper reality that is well imagined.
WHAT I SUGGEST: I didn't understand the film as intuitively (no pun intended) as I wanted to on my 1st viewing but that almost didn't matter because i enjoyed the ride.
This is a filmmaker's film that I can watch over and over again to learn and draw from!
When the chase is cut short, the guns come out to play! Check out GUNPLAY!
http://films.thelot.com/films/20882
FILM: The Intuitive Mind
LINK: http://films.thelot.com/films/19593
RATING: 5 / 5
WHAT I LIKED: Excellent cinematography - composition, colors, set design. There are so many nuances to appreciate in the choreography and performances, all bottled in a quirky hyper reality that is well imagined.
WHAT I SUGGEST: I didn't understand the film as intuitively (no pun intended) as I wanted to on my 1st viewing but that almost didn't matter because i enjoyed the ride.
This is a filmmaker's film that I can watch over and over again to learn and draw from!
When the chase is cut short, the guns come out to play! Check out GUNPLAY!
http://films.thelot.com/films/20882
The Lot Review Responses for GUNPLAY
SKYGUY: Wow, I am indebted to your kind words and for taking the time review my film in-depth. It's nice to know I'm doing something right, and I can only hope to continue directing films an electric response of somekind! Thanks again!
ViewMaster | Mar 02, 2007
This action thriller caught me by surprise.
I was quickly drawn in by the seductive suspense, and clever turns in the plot.
More than once I thought I had comprehended what was happening and able to predict what would happen next. Wrong!
Sam Yano gives a refreshing new life to the action thriller. The excellent music adds to the suspense and subtly leads the viewers.
If you like action thrillers, you'll be watching this film more than once guaranteed. Like the classic movie "Rear Window", it's so well done, you'll watch it again to take in the subtleties, depth and complexity.
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SKYGUY: Hammett is the man! What's you're favorite book? Mine is "Red Harvest." The Coen Bros film "Miller's Crossing" was inspired by this Hammett book as well as their 1st film "Blood Simple." In fact I was introduced to Hammett through researching Coen Bros films.
As a fellow Hammett fan I was drawn into the story. I thought there were some really nice-looking shots. At fist I wasn't sure about the whole "speedy" shots, but I think they definately helped pace this short appropriately. You definately have a talent for 3-d effects as well. Keep showing us good things.
If you get a chance take a look at my film. I would like to know your thoughts. It, hopefully, has a noir feel to it, so it may be up your alley.
http://films.thelot.com/films/21974
ViewMaster | Mar 02, 2007
This action thriller caught me by surprise.
I was quickly drawn in by the seductive suspense, and clever turns in the plot.
More than once I thought I had comprehended what was happening and able to predict what would happen next. Wrong!
Sam Yano gives a refreshing new life to the action thriller. The excellent music adds to the suspense and subtly leads the viewers.
If you like action thrillers, you'll be watching this film more than once guaranteed. Like the classic movie "Rear Window", it's so well done, you'll watch it again to take in the subtleties, depth and complexity.
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SKYGUY: Hammett is the man! What's you're favorite book? Mine is "Red Harvest." The Coen Bros film "Miller's Crossing" was inspired by this Hammett book as well as their 1st film "Blood Simple." In fact I was introduced to Hammett through researching Coen Bros films.
As a fellow Hammett fan I was drawn into the story. I thought there were some really nice-looking shots. At fist I wasn't sure about the whole "speedy" shots, but I think they definately helped pace this short appropriately. You definately have a talent for 3-d effects as well. Keep showing us good things.
If you get a chance take a look at my film. I would like to know your thoughts. It, hopefully, has a noir feel to it, so it may be up your alley.
http://films.thelot.com/films/21974
The Lot Reviews and Responses
SKYGUY: Thanks Kody! I'll be sure to check your film out.
Kody | Feb 28, 2007
Well done!
please check out my film
http://films.thelot.com/films/30109
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SKYGUY: Thanks! The intent was to do the film completely without dialog but a few words got slipped in.
jasmith111 | Feb 28, 2007
some of your camera angles were cool. i liked the editing too. the msuic fit pretty well to the story. i liked that you told the story with limited dialogue. good luck to you.....
http://films.thelot.com/films/8878
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SKYGUY: All the elements of hard-boiled fiction were incorporated - the dangerous environment (the dark house), the dedicated investigator (the man in the wrong place at the wrong time), the corrupt authoritarian (the man with the most guns), and the dangerous woman (no need to explain this one).
ladiagonal | Mar 01, 2007
It's cool, yeah, I like the guys, the face of the protagonist and the girl...yeah!
So good luck for your film!
Demonlater(ladiagonal)
http://films.thelot.com/films/19476
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SKYGUY: I'll admit this film is not for everyone but I see you might be a noir fan so I'll check out your film.
Spartan | Mar 01, 2007
I'm sorry, but I really didn't feel involved when watching this. I didn't care about any of the characters or what their motives were. The camera work wasn't bad, but apart from that I can't think of anything that particularly impressed me.
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SKYGUY: A business proposition? You had me at "UNIVERSAL STUDIOS BACKLOT on 35mm film!"
anthonychirco | Mar 01, 2007
nice!
please come rate mine and I'll come back and do the same for you!
THIS GOES FOR ANYONE, RATE MINE AND I'LL RATE YOURS!
let's support each other!
i shot it on the UNIVERSAL STUDIOS BACKLOT on 35mm film!
it's called "FIGHT!"
http://films.thelot.com/films/14416
grazie!
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SKYGUY: Short and sweet - thanks Jamiegirl!
jamiegirl | Mar 01, 2007
ok, alright!
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SKYGUY: Sounds like my kind of entertainment - don't dissappoint!
Eric_Demeusy | Mar 01, 2007
want to see beasts, horror, and action??
check out my film called "Meat Pie"
tell me what you think.
Eric
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SKYGUY: Thank you Actionqueen - to my actors' credit I didn't come on set with a script and simply told them on the spot what the shot was going to be. I ended up rewriting my original conception in my head and didn't even finalize the final showdown until the morning of the 2nd day of production.
Actionqueen | Mar 02, 2007
Loved your intro. Not sure about the fast motion effects you used in your film. It distracted me. Also some of your actors were not believable enough. Liked some of your shots. They were very intense. Liked the music too but you had too much of that in there. Keep up the good work.
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SKYGUY: With a budget I'd be shooting on the moon baby! Thanks for the kind words and hope to bring you more in the future.
Ringo1967 | Mar 02, 2007
This short has all of the pace and timing of a real suspense action film. I can only imagine what Sam can do with a budget! Excellent stuff.
Kody | Feb 28, 2007
Well done!
please check out my film
http://films.thelot.com/films/30109
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SKYGUY: Thanks! The intent was to do the film completely without dialog but a few words got slipped in.
jasmith111 | Feb 28, 2007
some of your camera angles were cool. i liked the editing too. the msuic fit pretty well to the story. i liked that you told the story with limited dialogue. good luck to you.....
http://films.thelot.com/films/8878
__________
SKYGUY: All the elements of hard-boiled fiction were incorporated - the dangerous environment (the dark house), the dedicated investigator (the man in the wrong place at the wrong time), the corrupt authoritarian (the man with the most guns), and the dangerous woman (no need to explain this one).
ladiagonal | Mar 01, 2007
It's cool, yeah, I like the guys, the face of the protagonist and the girl...yeah!
So good luck for your film!
Demonlater(ladiagonal)
http://films.thelot.com/films/19476
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SKYGUY: I'll admit this film is not for everyone but I see you might be a noir fan so I'll check out your film.
Spartan | Mar 01, 2007
I'm sorry, but I really didn't feel involved when watching this. I didn't care about any of the characters or what their motives were. The camera work wasn't bad, but apart from that I can't think of anything that particularly impressed me.
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SKYGUY: A business proposition? You had me at "UNIVERSAL STUDIOS BACKLOT on 35mm film!"
anthonychirco | Mar 01, 2007
nice!
please come rate mine and I'll come back and do the same for you!
THIS GOES FOR ANYONE, RATE MINE AND I'LL RATE YOURS!
let's support each other!
i shot it on the UNIVERSAL STUDIOS BACKLOT on 35mm film!
it's called "FIGHT!"
http://films.thelot.com/films/14416
grazie!
__________
SKYGUY: Short and sweet - thanks Jamiegirl!
jamiegirl | Mar 01, 2007
ok, alright!
__________
SKYGUY: Sounds like my kind of entertainment - don't dissappoint!
Eric_Demeusy | Mar 01, 2007
want to see beasts, horror, and action??
check out my film called "Meat Pie"
tell me what you think.
Eric
__________
SKYGUY: Thank you Actionqueen - to my actors' credit I didn't come on set with a script and simply told them on the spot what the shot was going to be. I ended up rewriting my original conception in my head and didn't even finalize the final showdown until the morning of the 2nd day of production.
Actionqueen | Mar 02, 2007
Loved your intro. Not sure about the fast motion effects you used in your film. It distracted me. Also some of your actors were not believable enough. Liked some of your shots. They were very intense. Liked the music too but you had too much of that in there. Keep up the good work.
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SKYGUY: With a budget I'd be shooting on the moon baby! Thanks for the kind words and hope to bring you more in the future.
Ringo1967 | Mar 02, 2007
This short has all of the pace and timing of a real suspense action film. I can only imagine what Sam can do with a budget! Excellent stuff.
Reviews
FILM: Suspect
LINK: http://films.thelot.com/films/21974
RATING: 3.5 / 5
WHAT I LIKED: There's something enchanting about the soft yet contrasty image, the vignetted edges, the music. The music did well to set the tone.
WHAT I SUGGEST: Some shots were a little too dark.
I can see the Hammett influence - this had a nice contemporary feel to a classic premise.
When the chase is cut short, the guns come out to play! Check out GUNPLAY!
http://films.thelot.com/films/20882
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FILM: Fairy-Tales & Lullabies
LINK: http://films.thelot.com/films/19544
RATING: 3 / 5
WHAT I LIKED: I really liked the tie-in of the title and the premise of the film. And the dialog as written worked.
WHAT I SUGGEST: The photography and set design is too stilted - nuances in the shot selection/framing could have aesthetically and thematically connected the men beyond just talking heads.
The Hammett reference was a bit unsubtle but appreciate nonetheless!
When the chase is cut short, the guns come out to play! Check out GUNPLAY!
http://films.thelot.com/films/20882
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FILM: Mood
LINK: http://films.thelot.com/films/28821
RATING: 3 / 5
WHAT I LIKED: The beginning had an authentic feel that sold the outrageous premise. While I get the sense that this is more of a spoof, there's something poignant in the message.
WHAT I SUGGEST: The quality of the production seemed to be inconsistent as the film played.
Great effort!
When the chase is cut short, the guns come out to play! Check out GUNPLAY!
http://films.thelot.com/films/20882
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FILM: Payback!
LINK: http://films.thelot.com/films/14416
RATING: 2 / 5
WHAT I LIKED: I dug the campiness of the film - it didn't take itself seriously and was more or less a spoof on action/violence in films.
WHAT I SUGGEST: It's very hard to appreciate the fact that this film was shot on a back lot and on 35MM film - this film just doesn't take advantage of those factors.
I can feel the Payback coming!
When the chase is cut short, the guns come out to play! Check out GUNPLAY!
http://films.thelot.com/films/20882
LINK: http://films.thelot.com/films/21974
RATING: 3.5 / 5
WHAT I LIKED: There's something enchanting about the soft yet contrasty image, the vignetted edges, the music. The music did well to set the tone.
WHAT I SUGGEST: Some shots were a little too dark.
I can see the Hammett influence - this had a nice contemporary feel to a classic premise.
When the chase is cut short, the guns come out to play! Check out GUNPLAY!
http://films.thelot.com/films/20882
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FILM: Fairy-Tales & Lullabies
LINK: http://films.thelot.com/films/19544
RATING: 3 / 5
WHAT I LIKED: I really liked the tie-in of the title and the premise of the film. And the dialog as written worked.
WHAT I SUGGEST: The photography and set design is too stilted - nuances in the shot selection/framing could have aesthetically and thematically connected the men beyond just talking heads.
The Hammett reference was a bit unsubtle but appreciate nonetheless!
When the chase is cut short, the guns come out to play! Check out GUNPLAY!
http://films.thelot.com/films/20882
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FILM: Mood
LINK: http://films.thelot.com/films/28821
RATING: 3 / 5
WHAT I LIKED: The beginning had an authentic feel that sold the outrageous premise. While I get the sense that this is more of a spoof, there's something poignant in the message.
WHAT I SUGGEST: The quality of the production seemed to be inconsistent as the film played.
Great effort!
When the chase is cut short, the guns come out to play! Check out GUNPLAY!
http://films.thelot.com/films/20882
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FILM: Payback!
LINK: http://films.thelot.com/films/14416
RATING: 2 / 5
WHAT I LIKED: I dug the campiness of the film - it didn't take itself seriously and was more or less a spoof on action/violence in films.
WHAT I SUGGEST: It's very hard to appreciate the fact that this film was shot on a back lot and on 35MM film - this film just doesn't take advantage of those factors.
I can feel the Payback coming!
When the chase is cut short, the guns come out to play! Check out GUNPLAY!
http://films.thelot.com/films/20882
Friday, March 02, 2007
Reviews
FILM: The Ocean
LINK: http://films.thelot.com/films/
31523
RATING: 3 / 5
WHAT I LIKED: Beautiful locations and underwater footage lend a vastness to this feel-good travelog.
WHAT I SUGGEST: The 1st few shots were too dark.
Excellent!
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FILM: Innocence lost
LINK: http://films.thelot.com/films/
30109
RATING: 3 / 5
WHAT I LIKED: Very haunting piece with interesting choice of angles and editing.
WHAT I SUGGEST: Some of the camera movements were a little too shakey.
An excellent film from a very young talent!
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FILM: STARS
LINK: http://films.thelot.com/films/
31207
RATING: 5 / 5
WHAT I LIKED: Very impressive and captivating. Detailed in its excellence from wardrobe to photography to dialog to performances. In an arena where the WWII soldier premise is repackaged again and again, this one really stands out which is an accomplishment in itself. The first film on The Lot that I have given 5 stars!
WHAT I SUGGEST: Very unfortunate that it was submitted after the deadline - but making deadlines are part of the biz.
Wonderful!
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FILM: wu tsar pian
LINK: http://films.thelot.com/films/
31098
RATING: 3 / 5
WHAT I LIKED: Great visual effects that enhance a film that is genuinely fun to watch.
WHAT I SUGGEST: The photography and lighting are a bit dark and muddy at times.
Entertaining spoof on kung-fu flicks.
LINK: http://films.thelot.com/films/
31523
RATING: 3 / 5
WHAT I LIKED: Beautiful locations and underwater footage lend a vastness to this feel-good travelog.
WHAT I SUGGEST: The 1st few shots were too dark.
Excellent!
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FILM: Innocence lost
LINK: http://films.thelot.com/films/
30109
RATING: 3 / 5
WHAT I LIKED: Very haunting piece with interesting choice of angles and editing.
WHAT I SUGGEST: Some of the camera movements were a little too shakey.
An excellent film from a very young talent!
__________
FILM: STARS
LINK: http://films.thelot.com/films/
31207
RATING: 5 / 5
WHAT I LIKED: Very impressive and captivating. Detailed in its excellence from wardrobe to photography to dialog to performances. In an arena where the WWII soldier premise is repackaged again and again, this one really stands out which is an accomplishment in itself. The first film on The Lot that I have given 5 stars!
WHAT I SUGGEST: Very unfortunate that it was submitted after the deadline - but making deadlines are part of the biz.
Wonderful!
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FILM: wu tsar pian
LINK: http://films.thelot.com/films/
31098
RATING: 3 / 5
WHAT I LIKED: Great visual effects that enhance a film that is genuinely fun to watch.
WHAT I SUGGEST: The photography and lighting are a bit dark and muddy at times.
Entertaining spoof on kung-fu flicks.
Reviews
FILM: The Clues Brothers
LINK: http://films.thelot.com/films/
10280
WHAT I LIKED: The trailer is flashy and exudes a feeling of high production value but with a sense of humor about itself.
WHAT I SUGGEST: I'm not entirely sure what the chase is about beyond just being cops and robbers.
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FILM: RED DOG
LINK: http://films.thelot.com/films/
881
WHAT I LIKED: Great production value that contrasts with the films tongue-and-cheek humor.
WHAT I SUGGEST: In all it's blurring of conventions the film still doesn't feel very original.
COMMENT: CRC sounds so much like Nick Cage!
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FILM: Gummy Bears
LINK: http://films.thelot.com/films/
493
WHAT I LIKED: Very entertaining. The film has a nonsensical fun about it reminiscent of the Luney Toons of old. Drummer gummy bear were funny as heck.
WHAT I SUGGEST: Though there was a gritty charm to it, the film would have benefited from better lighting composition.
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FILM: For All the Marbles
LINK: http://films.thelot.com/films/
48
WHAT I LIKED: Epic spin on a very familiar tale. Great cinematography, direction, and casting.
WHAT I SUGGEST: Some of the shots (like the POV of breaking through the Red Rover line) felt a bit clunky.
LINK: http://films.thelot.com/films/
10280
WHAT I LIKED: The trailer is flashy and exudes a feeling of high production value but with a sense of humor about itself.
WHAT I SUGGEST: I'm not entirely sure what the chase is about beyond just being cops and robbers.
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FILM: RED DOG
LINK: http://films.thelot.com/films/
881
WHAT I LIKED: Great production value that contrasts with the films tongue-and-cheek humor.
WHAT I SUGGEST: In all it's blurring of conventions the film still doesn't feel very original.
COMMENT: CRC sounds so much like Nick Cage!
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FILM: Gummy Bears
LINK: http://films.thelot.com/films/
493
WHAT I LIKED: Very entertaining. The film has a nonsensical fun about it reminiscent of the Luney Toons of old. Drummer gummy bear were funny as heck.
WHAT I SUGGEST: Though there was a gritty charm to it, the film would have benefited from better lighting composition.
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FILM: For All the Marbles
LINK: http://films.thelot.com/films/
48
WHAT I LIKED: Epic spin on a very familiar tale. Great cinematography, direction, and casting.
WHAT I SUGGEST: Some of the shots (like the POV of breaking through the Red Rover line) felt a bit clunky.
Thursday, March 01, 2007
GunPlay playing "On The Lot"!
My short film “GunPlay” has been slimmed and trimmed to premiere for the fine folk at Fox Television’s “On The Lot.” Drop on by, kick back and enjoy the show. Support the film by rating the film and writing a review.
http://films.thelot.com/films/20882
Thanks for all your support and I look forward to coming back with more films to share!
Sam K. Yano
http://www.skysyndicate.com/samdemo/blog.htm
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