The Pretzel Plot

I have a decent feature script treatment that is very likely to sell but when I revisited the plot it felt too conventional for a film without a high budget. So today I came up with a way to make things interesting called the Pretzel Plot. If it works you'll hear more about, but if it doesn't this will be the last you hear of it. Of course it's making things 100 times more difficult to map the plot out, but I will take the difficulty as a rite of passage to a better script.