Sunday, August 07, 2011
Saturday, August 06, 2011
Anatomy of SAKI character design: Kanekichi
Anatomy of SAKI character design: Saki
Friday, August 05, 2011
Midnight Chill
Thursday, August 04, 2011
Scarlet Influence
Saturday, July 30, 2011
TK Carter knife fight that inspired SAKI movie knife fight
You can see T. K. Carter's knife fight from the American TV show "Punky Brewster" that inspired the knife fight in SAKI. It starts right around 5:00.
Punky beginnings
Dreams that lie to me
Thursday, July 28, 2011
Subtext of subtitles
Monday, July 25, 2011
3D to come
I'm game Mr. Scott. And I'm certainly looking forward to PROMETHEUS to convince me.
Sunday, July 10, 2011
Anime Toy Story
Although I can identify with the movie TOY STORY, my childhood toy play was imagined more like this...
Friday, July 08, 2011
SAKI Writer/DP Production Notebook
In prepping for my next script I came across the production binder for my feature SAKI. There's a lot of sweat & tears in these pages but it's all about collaborating with a great group of artists.
Thursday, June 23, 2011
Dreams of War
True to it's Grit
Sunday, August 15, 2010
KS x RP
Monday, July 19, 2010
Production Binder
http://www.literatureandlatte.com/scrivener.html
Saturday, July 17, 2010
SAKI 2
Scrivner
Thursday, January 21, 2010
Puppet Master
Friday, January 08, 2010
Sam Bam's Top 15 Films of the Decade... and Why
Wednesday, November 18, 2009
Testing Another Pipe
Wednesday, September 30, 2009
Story vs. Plot
A story is a series of events recorded in their chronological order.
A plot is a series of events deliberately arranged so as to reveal their dramatic, thematic, and emotional significance. (39)
- Burroway, Janet. Writing Fiction: A Guide to Narrative Craft 5th ed. Longman, 2000.
Sunday, September 27, 2009
Usual Writing
Sunday, September 20, 2009
Brainstorm
Tuesday, August 18, 2009
Cognative Dissonance in Film
Feature Film Script Presentation
- Summarize story of film.
- Identify genre and underline themes of film.
- Identify main characters (at least 3) and describe their role in the film.
- Identify plot points of main character AND page number: Flaw, Catalyst, Big Event, Crisis, Pinch, Showdown, Realization.
- Identify the beginning and ending of Act 1, 2, and 3 and the plot points that transition to each act.
- Identify if the character changes by the end of the film and how or why this is so.
- Identify differences between script and film.
- Describe your own approach to directing this film: casting, locations, set design, lighting, camera, editing, etc.
- Oral presentation, 10 minutes.
Godfather Character Breakdown
Flaw: Doesn't want to be a part of his family.
Catalyst: Michael is always wanted close to the family but not a part of the business.
Big Event: Michael's father is shot.
Pinch: Michael must protect his father.
Crisis: Michael is the only one who can get close to Sollozzo and kill him.
Showdown: Michael discovers the traitor and plans a grand revenge.
Realization: Michael cannot escape his family responsibilities.
Vito Corleone
Flaw: Tries to retain to old ways, keep Michael out of family business.
Catalyst: Refuses to Sollozzo's drug business offer - grooms Sunny to take over business to keep Michael out. Don is shot.
Big Event: Don hears that Michael killed Sollozzo.
Pinch: Sunny is killed. Fredo is incapable of running the family.
Crisis: Michael is the only one who can run the family and find the traitor.
Showdown: Don dies and Michael takes over.
Realization: Times change and influence is subliminal as is blood - you cannot control fate.
Thursday, April 16, 2009
Screenwriting: Lecture 1
Our doubts are traitors, and make us lose the good we oft might win by fearing to attempt.
- William Shakespeare
SCREENPLAY by Syd Field
SCREENWRITER’S BIBLE by David Trottier
STORY by Robert McKee
20 MASTER PLOTS by Ronald B. Tobias
Other Recommended Books:
A WRITER’S REFERENCE by Diana Hacker
ON WRITING by Stephen King
Making Choices
Screenplay - Act - Scene
Screenwriting compared to other forms of writing
Novel
In many cases the reader is aware of characters thoughts, feelings, memories, hopes, dreams, etc.
Great for expressing internal conflict.
Reader can take on multiple points of view.
Action occurs in mindscape of dramatic action.
Play
Audience becomes 4th wall.
Characters talk or express their thoughts, feelings, memories, hopes, dreams, etc.
Action occurs in LANGUAGE of dramatic action.
Screenplay
Visual medium.
Story told in pictures, dialog, description all placed within context of dramatic structure
Linear = form = structure = beginning, middle, end
Genres
Plots that share certain characteristics
Character Goals
The desire to fulfill a need.
Obstacles stand in way of need
Obstacle is often a character flaw
Flaw often exists in back-story
Conflict
Spielberg said that in the best stories someone looses control of their life and must regain it.
Layers of Conflict
Outside / Action Story
Indiana’s desire to discover the Ark of the Covenant.
Inside / Emotional Story
Indiana’s feelings for Marion.
Types of Plots
Plot Driven Stories
Raiders of the Lost Ark
Apocalypto
Magnolia
Shawshank Redemption
Character Driven Stories
Amadeus
Citizen Kane
There Will Be Blood
Edward Scissor Hands
Types of Plots
Character wins
Character loses
Character sows own seeds of destruction
Character grows by doing the right thing
Character grows up
Character learns
Character fails to learn
Character declines / falls
Form not formula
Form = Structure
Formula = replication, imitation
Structural components a can be rearranged
Beginning, Middle, End
Birth, Life, Death
Sunrise, Sun up, Sunset
Style is the perceived measure of deviation from a standard or from what is perceived as “real.”
Learn the rules first then you can break them.
3 Act Structure
Act I
30 pages long
Setup story, dramatic premise, situation, relationships, environment
Act II
60 pages long
Obstacles that keep character from achieving dramatic need.
All drama is conflict
Act III
30 pages long
Succeed or fail
Resolves story
Plot Points
Any incidents, episode, or event that spins the action into another direction and is used as a transition into each successive act.
Main plot points occur at the end of Act I and the end of Act II.
Raiders of the Lost Ark
Action Story
Character Flaw: Indy’s obsession with Archeology
Emotional Story
Character Flaw: Indy chooses archeology over romance
Catalyst
Catalyst kicks things out of balance
Catalyst leads up to the Big Event
Catalyst reveals something about the main conflict
Foreshadowing, 伏線
Setting things up for a payoff later
Creates unity in story
Indiana hates snakes
Action Story
Catalyst: The Nazis are on the verge of discovering the Ark of the Covenant.
Emotional Story
Catalyst: His old flame Marion has the key to the Ark of the Covenant.
Action Story
Plot Point 1 / Big Event: Indy obtains the key to finding the Ark.
Emotional Story
Plot Point 1 / Big Event: Indy is stuck with Marion.
Pinch
Major event that fully commits the character
Point where all seems lost
Raiders of the Lost Ark
Action Story
Pinch: Indy and company are buried alive in a tomb.
Emotional Story
Pinch: Marion is kidnapped by the Nazis.
Action Story
Plot Point 2 / Crisis: The Nazis obtain the Ark and intend to open it.
Emotional Story
Plot Point 2 / Crisis: Indy must choose between destroying the Ark or saving Marion.
Showdown
Everything on the line
Showdown is bigger than Big Event
Unity of Opposites ensures character plots will cross
Raiders of the Lost Ark
Action Story
Showdown: Indy chooses not to see what is in the Ark.
Emotional Story
Showdown: Indy and Marion are both captured but Indy insists that Marion not look at what is revealed by opening the Ark.
Tuesday, March 24, 2009
Etienne!

Made a hamster sized contribution to this feature film but it was enjoyable. Check out ETIENNE! at www.hamstermovie.com. Going big in Vegas!
Friday, January 30, 2009
Saying goodbye to my old car - in my dream

Another weird dream. It started out with this sleazy restaurant owner that bought a an old run down place that had a specific name and logo that I couldn't remember. From there it somehow transitioned to me in some kind of contest where a bunch of medical practitioners (doctors and nurses) gathered in some kind of parking structure where I parked my old Infiniti G20 car (which I recently sold in reality). After everyone parked we all filed into some big cave like building where we were being locked into for a period of time - a month or so. It was kind of a social experiment like survivor where we were all supposed to live with each other and either help or compete for food, clothing, etc. So the 1st thing they throw at us is this huge cement truck full of ice cream and they put some hill-billy in distributing amongst the people. While everyone got just a small cup full, this hill-billy and his friends got cup after cup of this ice cream and so everyone was just got raving made to have this ice cream. That's when I noticed the logo on the side of the cement tuck was the same as the logo on the old restaurant, only the bottom was scratched out to say "Ice Cream." so as if it was some kind of flashback sequence, I went back to the beginning of the dream and over-heard this sleazy restaurant owner confess that he made up this survival game to create demand for his newly branded ice cream.
Then, I kind of flash out of that story and into me and my sister watching the ice cream restaurant story unfold on TV. After a few minutes I get bored and leave my sister to watch the show alone. I head for the parking garage to visit my Infiniti car and for some reason decide it would be a good idea to cut through the concrete floor of the parking structure around my car. After a few minutes I had this imperfect circle around my car and the next thing I knew there's a rumble and the Infiniti falls down to the level below smashing a Nissan 300Z car below it. Now in my dream, this was an unexpected result and I messed up my car along with someone else's. The guy who bought the car was supposed to pick up the car next Tuesday (in reality that's when he supposed to really pick up my car) and now he's not going to want to pay the full price with all this damage. So I'm freaking out and then this French guy starts complaining to me at the other end of the parking lot about how I've cut holes in the parking garage floor before and because of me they building owner had to re-route the water pipes because of the damages I caused. and then i realized in my dream that this was only a dream, so I reassured the French guy that none of this actually happened and woke up.
Tuesday, January 20, 2009
Che Part 1

Just saw Che Part 1 (of 2). Very much a biopic if I've seen one. It had the same tone as the "Fidel" biopic that aired a few years back on HBO (I think it was) - a mix of Che's UN speech inter cut with the Cuban revolution. At times it moves slow but I appreciate how the film avoids spectacle by letting the character breathe and talk and contemplate. In which case I suppose it's marathon running time can somewhat be justified. It's interesting how unnoticeable Soderberg is in this film - the film could have easily passed as an import from an under appreciated foreign filmmaker. Of course Del Toro couldn't have been anymore perfect for the role. From scene to scene there is no anticipation of plot but rather the feeling of history unfolding which is what fascinated me (my wife said the film seemed interesting but she quietly lost interest a quarter of the way through). So I wouldn't say this film is for everyone.
Look forward to seeing the other half. Interestingly the film was shot on the digital RED camera (although some scenes seemed to have been treated to look like 16mm). Celluloid would seem like the logical choice for such a gritty biography like Che but the in watching the film, there is no distracting qualities that come through from it's digital acquisition. It actually looks quite good.
A Quick Round of Movie Reviews
Speed Racer - I liked it, but it seems like the rest of the world hates it.
The Lookout - A decent thriller if Memento was never made. Good performances.
Clerks 2 - I realized I was never into Clerks 1 but I've been listening to Kevin Smith's Smodcast and that's one hilariously random rant about gay sex, ass kicking, Nazi's, religion... you name it.
The Bank Job - If you expect the Transporter you won't get it - an exceedingly average film.
Rocky Balboa - I thought I could appreciate this film but I think it falls flat, at least Rambo had gratuitous violence.
Red Belt - Interesting film but the dialogue is weirded and surreal, the actors speak in simple sentences and repeat what they say. Maybe it's a Mammet thing.
Journey to the Center of the Earth - I should have known better than to rent this garbage.
Starship Troopers 3: Maurader - A friend's recommendation, yeah it's bad - the bad kind of bad. If you have Casper Van Deen listed as the main actor yet only really makes a guest appearance, you got one big pile of dung.
Paranoid Park - I thought I could appreciate this one too especially with Doyle behind the camera (and in front of it) but there wasn't enough in it to intrigue me.
Hellboy II - It was OK. Good effects and imaginative but it didn't seem to have any relevance - it didn't make me think or love or hate or feel... Hellboy I was kind of the same experience for me.
Tekkon Kinkreet - Very cool animated style and world. A kind of an evolved Akira story.
Books to Write With
"Screenplay" by Sid Field - The classic handbook to the 3 Act screenplay, a must for any tool kit.
"Screenwriter's Bible" by David Trottier - I Like this book because it introduces a plot structure driven by critical events that define and/or drives your character(s).
"20 Master Plots" by Ronald B. Tobias - I've had this one for almost a decade! This is where I learned the importance in balancing the triangle of relationships between characters and when I'm stuck plotting a story, I reference this book to get ideas on where to go.
"Story" by Robert McKee - If it can inspire Charlie Kaufman then it's good enough for me. If anything I learned that a great writer makes decisions whereas an inept writer avoids such responsibility.
"On Writing" by Stephen King - A seamless narrative of how he became to be and how he puts print to page. He claims that if you want to write, you got to read - a lot. The King reads something like 80 books in a year.
Here's a curve ball for you,
"Love Signs" by Linda Goodman - Now before you laugh your ass off, you know you yourself or someone close to you has identified with horoscopes on one level or another. This is simply because horoscopes are a time tested study of patterns and character. And if you think it's all fiction - well then that's exactly what we're writing, fiction. This book is a great reference on how your characters might interact with each other... and if you want to go one step further and use this book for your love life, well then that's just none of my business.
So there you go. You may now go back to your regularly scheduled programming.
Sam
Monday, July 14, 2008
Deja Vu
Thursday, November 29, 2007
Sleep Walker
The 1st two cases were when I and my good friends Robert Scott and Sean Lavin flew off to South America to shoot a documentary. In short, our travels got stressful at times - some of the toughest challenges I had ever faced. Tough in that the problems were much bigger than me, and I was completely out of my comfort zone - out of my element. There was nothing I could do about the Bolivian strike, the impoverished peoples, the road blockades, the rioting - I had absolutely no ability to either fix it or get a way from it. So in our time stuck in this small town the three of us were sleeping in a cramped room when I had this dream of chasing Sean down the narrow corridor of the train we had road into Bolivia, the "Tren de Muerta." Bodies of people were strewn all over the ground as I desperately crawled over them to try and keep up with Sean. Finally I reached out and started to scream Sean's name. After the third or fourth call I realized I was calling out loud from bed, disturbing the peace of the room and subsequently waking Sean and Scotty. When they asked if I was OK, I simply laughed in embarrassment and fell back into my sleep. In hind sight the laugh might have sounded somewhat sadistic because I never responded to Sean's calls after I woke him. The next morning I was stupid enough to bring up the incident, reminding Sean and Scotty of something they would have otherwise never remembered.
The second incident was well after we made it into Peru, but by then I had faced a humiliating and horrific bout of dysentery. As usual we all occupied a small room but in my dream I was now outside the train trying to get in. As I approached the door to the train, the massive machine began to move so I paced with the moving door and yelled to my companions to open up. As the train moved faster I became more and more desperate so I knocked on the train door when I suddenly realized I was out of bed and knocking on the room door. Once again I laughed at myself and went back to bed. And once again I was stupid enough to mention it to my companeros who would have otherwise remembered nothing. But they were good sports about the whole incident - I was genuinely concerned that I was going out of my mind. But then that would be the last of my sleepwalking for awhile. So many years later I would walk again, only this time the incidents were much more involved and that much more peculiar.
Saturday, August 11, 2007
Rory Kelly Haunts Us
have less to do with R. Kelly than the title implies, the clips brings
back the "rush" of being in his class. The person that posted the
video obviously has issues with his CSULB experience.
http://youtube.com/watch?v=ASs9IXnq2ns&mode=related&search=
Still no peep from Rory on my letter of recommendation to AFI...
holding my breath... turning blue...
Sam
Friday, July 13, 2007
Dreams
Thursday, June 07, 2007
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Tuesday, May 29, 2007
On Writing
- Art is not the life-support system to life, it's the other way
around. He says this in the context of having your writing desk in the
corner of a room rather than in the center.
- Creating a good story is like digging up a fossil - you try and
uncover something that already exists as complete as you can with your
set of tools.
- To be a good writer, you must read a lot and write a lot.
I suppose I should write out more key points as I re-read the book
("On Writing" is one of the few books I'm reading a 2nd time). More to
come I'm sure.
Sam
Wednesday, April 11, 2007
Newport Beach to Feel the "Effect"
If you missed the DGA showing of “The Richter Effect,” now is your chance to catch it at the Newport Beach Film Festival. The short film will show in the Cal State University Long Beach Showcase 4/26/2007 at 7:30 pm in the Edwards Island Cinemas - Cox Theater. As always I want to thank my cast and crew for making the film happen and I’m glad to see that collaborative energy propel us unto bigger and brighter endeavors, together.
'The Richter Effect' will appear in the following in the order shown:
Program CSULB Showcase
'The TV Broke' Contact - Gerson Sanginitto sanginitto@hotmail.com
'One Sister' Contact - Michelle Gevoian mwridir@earthlink.net
'Bee Golden' Contact - Ryan Silveira rsilveira@gmail.com
'West of Glory' Contact - Daniel Kinsbursky offhollywoodprod@aol.com
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'The Unobtrusive Plot' Contact - Gregory Crosby LBMovieMaker@hotmail.com
'The Richter Effect' Contact - Sam Yano sky@skysyndicate.com
'Each Other' Contact - Roger Melvin jmelvinjr@hotmail.com
'Orizuru' Contact - Junya Sakino div-pictures@swissinfo.org
Ad Infinitum,
Sam K. Yano
Director, “The Richter Effect”
CREDITS AND THANK YOUS:
CAST
Sean P. Lavin, Father
- My brother in arms, from the beginning to our undiscovered end.
Lezli Alley, Mother
- Lezli swooped in and saved me in the last moments of casting, meeting and beating my expectations for her role.
Connor Webb, Danny
- Connor kept the production light with his charming smile and curious nature – he reminded me of why I never want to grow up.
Brooke DeBetties, Melissa
- Professional through and through, talented as well as dedicated beyond her years – a rare find to live and learn by.
ASSISTANT DIRECTOR
Adam Amberden
- He managed to hit every curve ball I threw at him during production. And he just makes me laugh by being himself. Thanks Adam!
CINEMATOGRAPHY BY
Matt Dow
- Another homerun hitter. He backed all my plays no matter how ridiculous – Matt is the ultimate “Fixer” because he just made things work without even breaking a sweat.
ASSISTANT CAMERA
Anne Caballero
- When comes to camera positioning and framing, you either got it or you don’t – Anne’s got it… and then some!
GAFFER
José Sanchez
- Mister suave! When Sanchez speaks everything is just smooth and cool. Like a warming shot of tequila.
Archie Arenas
- When Archie smiles, it could be good or it could be bad, but at least you’ll know you can laugh about it later.
GRIPS
Michael Rossetti
- There ain’t anyone that knows their production stuff like the Rossetti – he’s scary that way. Nuff said.
Lester Corpuz
- Mister nice. You just can’t go wrong with this guy – calm, collected – I dare anyone to claim that they don’t like Lester. Lester’s cool.
SOUND
ReyRonald Pineda
- Yeah… um, if there’s anyone I can easily blame for things going wrong on set, Rey would be the perfect scapegoat. But the guy has a heart of gold and he’s a really good friend. So I can only blame myself for liking the guy too much. Thanks Rey.
PRODUCTION COORDINATOR
Glenda Sherrell
- Always there with a winning enthusiasm. Thanks Glenda!
PRODUCTION ASSISTANTS
David Philip Miller – Thanks David!
Nicholas Pasqua – Nice guy. Thanks Nick!
Miho Shindo – I ended up marrying this PA.
MAKE-UP
Jennifer Kroll
- What is “The Richter Effect”? Well great performances framed by great makeup.
CATERING
Diane Timmons
IT Catering
- The food was good – Diane took good care of us and you know there’s nothing better than a hot meal after working your butt off.
EDITING BY
Sam K. Yano
- I wouldn’t trust my baby with anyone else.
SPECIAL THANKS TO
Rory Kelly
- The man, the myth, the legend. The god-father of my film production education.
Thursday, March 22, 2007
Tuesday, March 13, 2007
REVIEWS
FILM: The Unknown Street
LINK: http://films.thelot.com/films/11265
RATING: 3.5 / 5
WHAT I LIKED: This documentary certainly has a heart and the imagery
is tragically beautiful in it's exotic locals and textured reality. It
also represents a unique perspective where the filmmaker himself is
very much a part of his message - the theme of surviving on limited
resources but thriving on altruism and the drive to achieve in
life/film making.
WHAT I SUGGEST: As I've commented on other documentaries, the key to
conveying your message is credibility. You are relying too much on the
sentimentality of your audience (how your audience feels about your
subject) rather than your characters/subjects evoking their own
sentiments.
The imagery you present goes a long way in establishing your
credibility but go one step farther - break the silence of these
people, get that camera up close and personal. Nice work.
When the chase is cut short, the guns come out to play! Check out GUNPLAY!
http://films.thelot.com/films/20882
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FILM REVIEW
FILM: Hero Hero
LINK: http://films.thelot.com/films/13970
RATING: 4 / 5
WHAT I LIKED: Playful photography and music. The performances and
locations exuded a wonderfully deep sense of New York / Brooklyn
culture.
WHAT I SUGGEST: The boy got lost in the shuffle - he could have
contributed to the end.
Fun film!
When the chase is cut short, the guns come out to play! Check out GUNPLAY!
http://films.thelot.com/films/20882
Saturday, March 10, 2007
FILM REVIEWS
FILM: Broken Doll Director's Cut
LINK: http://films.thelot.com/films/
8941
RATING: 3 / 5
WHAT I LIKED: Great opening graphics and photography give this film a unique style that pays homage to the psychological horror thrillers of old - very Hitchcock.
WHAT I SUGGEST: Ambient sound went in and out and the poor, hollow quality of the camera clicks and spoken words disrupted the experience.
Very curious film!
When the chase is cut short, the guns come out to play! Check out GUNPLAY!
http://films.thelot.com/films/
20882
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FILM REVIEW
FILM: THE THING UNDER MY BED
LINK: http://films.thelot.com/films/
10270
RATING: 3 / 5
WHAT I LIKED: Great opening shot that establishes a freaky character. There are some genuinely tense moments when the "boogey man" pop in and out of the frame. Kinetic photography.
WHAT I SUGGEST: Some of the shots were too dark to follow the action. The film does well to exploit some moments of surprise but it never mixes up the formula and the film ultimately does nothing satisfying with each time it catches your attention.
Nice make up job - the old man is certainly freaky.
When the chase is cut short, the guns come out to play! Check out GUNPLAY!
http://films.thelot.com/films/
20882
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FILM REVIEW
FILM: POPCORN DREAMS
LINK: http://films.thelot.com/films/
2557
RATING: 4 / 5
WHAT I LIKED: Very smooth, cinematic photography with stylized lighting and set design that supported the narrative. Playful music selection.
WHAT I SUGGEST: The end is a bit anticlimactic despite the moral of the story - because the film is so stylized and fantasy centric there is an expectation of a bigger than life ending. But the film's end is more or less a "real-life" irony which seemingly contradicts its look and feel.
Nice film!
When the chase is cut short, the guns come out to play! Check out GUNPLAY!
http://films.thelot.com/films/
20882
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FILM REVIEW
FILM: Beans on Wheels - 3
LINK: http://films.thelot.com/films/
29135
RATING: 3 / 5
WHAT I LIKED: Quirky film with some funny, almost disturbing, images (and audio). Some shots had a unique look and feel (like when the wheel chair bound woman was rolling through a disaster of a house - good stuff).
WHAT I SUGGEST: The quality of the photography was very inconsistent. Some of the ambient noise became really distracting.
Sad, yes. Funny, yes!
When the chase is cut short, the guns come out to play! Check out GUNPLAY!
http://films.thelot.com/films/
20882
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FILM REVIEW
FILM: MY WALLET
LINK: http://films.thelot.com/films/
15693
RATING: 3.5 / 5
WHAT I LIKED: Like a well adapted live action Looney Tunes cartoon. Some great comical timing and action, interesting shot selection, and some funny impromptu moments.
WHAT I SUGGEST: As great as some of action camera work was, the quality was inconsistent and most of the sound was not clear or the levels were uneven.
Great work! Looks like this film was fun to make.
When the chase is cut short, the guns come out to play! Check out GUNPLAY!
http://films.thelot.com/films/
20882
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FILM REVIEW
FILM: creasy
LINK: http://films.thelot.com/films/
20493
RATING: 4 / 5
WHAT I LIKED: Fantastic photography - well lit and composed. The performances were sincere and hit the right dramatic tone. I can appreciate the angle of the story - not the typical anti-pharmaceutical big-business scenario but of someone caught in between.
WHAT I SUGGEST: The main speech verged on melodrama simply because it ran too long and pushed in too close when the true intimacy between the character and audience should have been during the last shot of Creasy visiting the grave.
Great looking film!
When the chase is cut short, the guns come out to play! Check out GUNPLAY!
http://films.thelot.com/films/
20882
Friday, March 09, 2007
BUDDHA AND THE HECKLER - RESPONSE TO A REVIEW OF GUNPLAY
When Buddha was speaking to a group of people one day, a heckler interrupted him with a barrage of disrespectful insults. This continued for days until finally Buddha ask the man a simple question in the form of a short anecdote: If you were to give someone a gift and they were to refuse to accept that gift, then to whom does that gift belong? The heckler responded by saying that the unaccepted gift would belong to the person giving the gift. Then Buddha asked: Then if you were to give me your insults and I were to refuse to accept those insults, then to whom do those insults belong? The heckler could not respond.
Thanks for watching mdduke, and you're right - it should be 1 luv. So BLEEP you and I'll be sure to check your film out ; )
mdduke | Mar 08, 2007
CUZ this was the worst want to be gangsta flick I have seen in some time. It doesn't look like this is the genre for U, I don't know whether to blame U or the actors for this BLEEP. Any body that knows what a gun is knows that when the barrel is exposed like it was that means the clip is empty. What was the purpose for him taking it out to look at it, was it because U were trying to add suspense? Well let me be the first to tell you all that did was further add to the disappointment of that 5:46 minute waste time. The way you placed all the frames together was not the problem, it was just the concept and story line. Leave the genre to the people that know about gun play CUZ that BLEEP was a motha BLEEPin GUN SHAME. Change the title to "gun lame," it would suit your film better!
1 luv & may God B wit U CUz!
PS if U look at my film U will see doing some comical things with my heater. But best believe I can break that chrome BLEEP down blind folded! The BLEEP I was doing wit my BLEEP was 4 kicks, and not to be taken serious. U need to put your film under comedy CUZ dat BLEEP was a riot!
RESPONSES TO GUNPLAY REVIEWS
to be too much and others didn't get it at all. I tried to find that
sweet spot of subtlety without being too abstract about my ideas -
then again, I tend to lean towards the commercial sensibility of
wanting to explicate everything. I learn balance with every film I
make. And I back my actors up 100% - there's always room for
improvement but they did a bang-up job for me on set and on screen.
behindtheart | Mar 09, 2007
The acting was? You tryed to hard telagraphing evreything. So
pradictable. I cant spell . The style it was shot in was nice it had a
look. leave somthing to think about. Paint an abstract and let the
breath find the truth.
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SKYGUY: Thanks Hitman_1942! Omitting dialog was a big help in being
able to shoot the coverage I wanted in the time I had. Most don't
realize that the quality of audio, especially dialog, can really make
or break a film. I'll be sure to check out your film. Thanks again for
watching.
Hitman_1942 | Mar 04, 2007
That was actually kinda funny. I liked the animation you did while he
was throwing the gun. I should start making movies where nobody talks
then they won't have to worry about messing up their lines.
Check out The Habit
http://films.thelot.com/films/20947
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SKYGUY: Thanks for recognizing the music! That's all scored by Isaac
Agyeman - really nice guy. We worked hard on getting the right sound
going through several themes and styles. I really do like dealing with
cinematography - it plays an important role in telling my stories. But
directing is the grand challenge. Directing is so abstract in the ways
you can approach it that I am drawn by its mystery. Thanks for
watching!
maxtone | Mar 04, 2007
The audio on intro was a little low.
Though I didn't fully understand project - you get an "A+" for the
MUSIC. It was AWESOME! Love those beats.
You had some very FABULOUS shots though. Lighting was good too. You
have a GREAT EYE for details. Just work on the script more. I know it
was challenging without dialogue.
Good luck.
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SKYGUY: I like me a good, in depth, story as well. But this was more
of an exercise in plotting and fast action. Hopefully my latest film
and my future films will show more of my strength in story. I've also
started a story writing excersize on my blog should you care to check
it out:
http://community.thelot.com/blogs/skyguy
Thanks for the review!
ouneoas | Mar 04, 2007
Nice job on the shot selection and the music( I really liked it).
There were times where the fast motion to regular motion shots were a
little to much. And I agree with maxtone that your story isn't really
there, not to say thats a bad thing per say, just my preference. All
in all nice job and good luck. Thanks for the review.
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Thanks Victor! My latest short, "The Richter Effect," has more dialog
and will be showing at the Newport Beach Film Festival. You can catch
the teaser here:
http://www.skysyndicate.com/samdemo/media.htm
Thanks for the kind review!
victorpeceno | Mar 04, 2007
Good music
i miss dialogue but even without it
it is entertainning
good job
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SKYGUY: I'm glad the end worked for you - it's been a topic of debate
but I'm happy with the ending I decided to go with. Thanks for
dropping by.
jrhndrsn | Mar 04, 2007
The music throughout the film really carried the suspense. The guns
were used in an unexpected way.
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SKYGUY: Why you're welcome! And have another drink on me!
baddsully | Mar 04, 2007
hello. thank you. and good luck.
yeah, i'm drunk on a sunday. and?



